Selasa, 28 Mei 2013

Hortatory Exposition Paragraphs_




Freedom is a thing that everyone always wants to do. But we know  also if freedom may be a good action or not. The action is sometimes excessive among adolescents and adults. It  concerns about   drugs, alcohol, and free sex that may result bad in the future, etc. Especially, it focus to adolescents  who needs to care more than we know from their parents. We have to respond and take a serious action if the adolecents have been done devitions. How ever, to protect is better than not at all. It has action why adolecents may do deviations, that’s about a relationship among adolecents to parents.
At first, because the parents don’t pay attention to their adolescents cause they are too busy doing works and perhaps no time to communicate so that will be miss understanding among them. So, adolescents will feel less ignored and in fact it may count largely ignored by them. The second, it is important for us to keep them as older people, although we don’t make much time together, but it is so rich on thinking of odolescents for themself. When the parents are so far with their odolescents, it will be made a chance to look for a way by themself without thinking again. After that, they may make not only a mistake but also a freedom without rules. This is very dangerous situation even adolecents grow to be grown up.
As we know, even adolescents are done a relationship outside the home with others. parents seldom care with their adolescents who make a friendship to others. Probably, the others may affect characters of them so that it will made deviations by itself. It doesn’t mean to ban them for doing a friendship cause we realize about a deviation is known so difficult for us when going outside . Either parents or adolescents need to keep in touch so that make sure the parents if they are already to do anything without worrying bad things will be happened. So, parents should be given time to them moreover when adolescents need somebody to talk, they will be reached out parents first as space where to express their feelings even parents really do.   





Written By : Deddy Mus Heryanto
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